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New WIP and need help!
🕑 Added 2023-09-15 18:59:04 +0000 UTCHello patrons! :)
Here's a new WIP of the next page: it still needs work, but it's slowly coming along!
However, I need your help and suggestion for two things:
1- You might notice a large question mark in the bottom right corner. Any idea of what I could put there? I was going for an obvious foot shot, but I'm opened to other suggestions! :)
2- I'd also be opened to suggestions about some dialog for the bottom panel, as I don't really know what Fox could be saying (other than things like "this is my best non-birthday gift to meeee!" or "I wonder if you'll howl more if I just go HERE!?").
Thanks!
Comments
Daerc
oh goodie~ Wreck him more till he breaks sound way more fun tbh!
Daerc
Maybe Wolf isn't even saying anything because of his non-stop laughter. But how about, instead his (potentially?) still intact mind is just begging for mercy instead. He'd just never say THAT out aloud, tho.
Yaba
I agree with Daerc. Wolf's face in utter desperation! Tears streaming down both his eyes, soaking his eyepatch. Maybe getting red from all the laughing~ Fox maybe saying something like "The big bad Wolf O'Donnell...a ticklish little pup~ >;3" as for Wolf's dialogue, that depends on if this is the last page or not xD
