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Jackanapes The Eighth, Page 8
🕑 Added 2022-07-21 00:47:48 +0000 UTCDaphne meets the Horse-men of the Acropolis. I’m pretty sure that’s the saying.
I’m a little concerned that the sequence of panels may be confusing. I like the dynamic layout, but is it clear that Daphne talks about her excitement second in sequence, and Squanknuts gets riddled with arrows third?
EDIT: I took Sebastian’s excellent layout suggestion, and now I think it’s clearer.
Comments
Japes
Excellent! Thank you!
Sebastian Yost
I see why you’re worried and if it were me I’d take the giant’s “Ow” bubble and lower it toward the lower panel corner, like over his arm. When initially read the page (before I read your comment) my eye went to his “Ow” first which was what initially threw me. I find the layout of text tends to lead the eye even more than panel layout
