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Chapter 41 - The La'ark

🕑 Added 2024-07-05 12:30:07 +0000 UTC

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Abraham Carson

"I do not quail from the spilling of necks" to quail from something is to be afraid of it. The La'ark isn't afraid of spilling necks.

Rabarbra

I love this banter! Now, peruse my collection of corrections: Once you...'purify' one, if you can actually do such a thing, they we must assume more will come. - they->then? Or just delete "they". Sentence is a bit unclear, my interpretation of it would make more sense with a "Even" at the start I do not quail from the spilling of necks. - Was this meant to be written like this? Or did you mix two idioms? Though they were different in their lore, the ward shared had a similar “feel” to artificial conduits. - Remove either "shared" or "had". Not all woman are birthed with beauty. - all->every + are->is or woman->women. But it was only with the help of lyanth resin and the song of the gastropods was he able to fall back to sleep. - Either remove "it was" or change "was he able" to "that he was able"


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