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Animated Page Movie Draft

🕑 Added 2025-07-28 16:11:28 +0000 UTC
Animated Page Movie Draft

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IronStrawberry

Refined in what way? Just the voice work, or other things, like the animated panning, dialogue balloons and text? Music?

Kaywye

Honestly? This is okay. I get what you were going for with the voice work...but it falls flat somehow. If it was a touch more...refined? Polished? Can't think of the right word here...but yeah I would watch it then.

Mayhem_13

There is real potential here. Besides the rough audio, nothing really stands out to me as a problem for what is suppose to be quick animations of certain panels. Keep up the great work.

Tyler Anderson

Well like you said it's a rough draft so it's a good start, only problem I have is the audio which you said would be fixed, and I don't know if that actual voice acting or AI but it sounds real enough so stick with that and don't make it sound robotic(well that is unless you're gonna use those Omega guys). Now my this just my preference but I'd like to at least get a climax and a build up to it. If you want I can send some examples via videos, but I would like to see the finished product and this could have potential.


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