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Savanah's Swan Song (Part 21)

🕑 Added 2025-03-20 14:50:59 +0000 UTC
Savanah's Swan Song (Part 21)
Savanah's Swan Song (Part 21)
Savanah's Swan Song (Part 21)
Savanah's Swan Song (Part 21)
Savanah's Swan Song (Part 21)
Savanah's Swan Song (Part 21)
Savanah's Swan Song (Part 21)
Savanah's Swan Song (Part 21)
Savanah's Swan Song (Part 21)
Savanah's Swan Song (Part 21)

Comments

Maverick and Riptoryx

Sorry...meant to write the above as a reply!

Maverick and Riptoryx

Appreciate it, Matt. The story has a lot of moving parts (and I'm not just talking about the androids!). Thanks for sticking with me! I don't want the horror/sci-fi elements to be overbearing (I know folks aren't here for Isaac Asimov or Stephen King), but they will continue to emerge over time...slowly creeping up on you like Savanah and Angelina's weight!

Matt L.

Smart writing. The key to writing a profound horror story is composing something that causes the reader to squirm, yet they're so enticed by the material, they're compelled to continue reading. The very idea of a service android specially programed to be the subordinate, then taking charge and becoming dominate to the point of being in control is as scary as it gets. This is some profound, neat writing, and does it ever press the correct buttons in the genre. You took a road I never expected, and ever twist and turn is more exciting than the previous. As for Savannah, I can only imagine how she'll try to keep from experiencing the chaos that has trampled Angelina's life and career, yet it's going to be 'all for not.' BTW; I should mention the weight gain is more than intriguing. Cheers to you.


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