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“The Lesson Plan” (An ONA: The Tutor Prequel)

🕑 Added 2022-10-31 18:21:18 +0000 UTC

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Maverick and Riptoryx

Thanks, Alaxar. Glad you're enjoying the prequels. As Rip alluded to, Mary Ellen's motivations will become clearer in the next one.

Alaxar

I am absolutely loving this prequels. This one was so devious. Mary Ellen had the ability to give Shelby the body of her dreams but instead sent her down a path that took it from her further. I hope to see more of Mary Ellen. To go from being jealous of Shelby's figure to using Shelby to make her own figure look better is quite the twist. Might even be the idea of Shelby's mother in the hopes that seeing the good looking friend might embarrass Shelby into getting her figure back. No matter what it is, I am looking forward to it. Great work as always!

Maverick and Riptoryx

What exactly are Mary Ellen's motivations in all this? To what extent may Shelby actually have been complicit in seeking out such seemingly sabotage-y "help?" When I posed those types of questions to Mav, his response essentially was "Uh huh. Indeed. Stay tuned for more." So, if you're curious like me, I suppose we'll just have to wait a bit longer. ;) -Riptoryx

Maverick and Riptoryx

For those who might want or need a smidgen more context for this prequel scene, here's the (brief yet intriguing) reference to Mary Ellen that can pop up in some playthroughs of One Night Adventure: The Tutor. *************** You take a deep breath and jump down the rabbit hole. "Why do you suppose that is?" "I have no idea. I've tried everything. I can't stop gaining." "What have you tried?" "Well, I let my friend Mary Ellen, she's a friend who doesn't go to our schoool, //thank God//, hypnotize me a few months ago and she said she thought it worked, but I've gained another twenty pounds since then so we must have done something wrong. Anyway, she said we should try again, but then I started thinking, 'What if Mary Ellen put me in some sort of weight-gain trance?' She's always been jealous of my figure, and now she suddenly wants me to hang-out with her at the beach and there's this pool party she wants me--" As Shelby drones, you rest your elbows on your knees and let your head loll. That's when you notice the corner of a pizza box poking out from beneath the bed. You grab the carboard container and pull it from its hiding place, causing a noisy avalanche of empty soda cans and junk food packaging. "Have you tried cutting out midnight snacks?" you ask, holding up exhibit A as exhibits B and C, a Hershey bar wrapper and a donut box, balance on its lid. ***************


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