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Daily Update 7/19/24
🕑 Added 2024-07-19 07:04:45 +0000 UTCreally, I'm only an hour late, this was supposed to be for 7/18/24. Today I decided to make an executive decision to scrap a page. The page is drawn badly and adds nothing to the plot. So it's outta here. But lets get in to it.
minor adjustment to this, just painted in her other leg.
This one I spent a lot of time on to get just right, and I'm pretty happy with it so far. It still needs extra rendering to be complete, but this base is pretty good.
Finally, I spent some of the day trying to blend this page and it just didn't look good. I realized that it wasn't the blending... well it wasn't ALL blending. It was the fact that the drawings aren't very good. It looks too much like two dolls posed together rather, and the logistics of their poses make little to no sense. So I'm replacing it with...
More Paizuri! I said to myself that if I ever threw out a page, I'd just replace it with paizuri because there isn't enough of it in this comic. This is a very rough sketch done over about 2 and a half hours. Gonna spend a few days with this page to get it up to where it needs to be, but I think this is more along the lines of what I want to make and what people want to see.
Maybe, when everything is said and done, I'll render the discarded pages and put them in a special edition release or something. But for now, I want to put my best foot forward with all of this.
Thank you for your support and I'll see you all tomorrow.
Comments
MagicCarpetMadeofSteel
More paizuri is always a win! I liked the page you’re cutting pretty well, but I’m no art critic, so I’ll take your word for it on their poses being all wrong, and I don’t think I’ll really miss it. Certainly an interesting position going on. I’m don’t think I’ve ever seen tit-fucking that was…basically perpendicular? To the chest/breasts/sternum (front-to-back perpendicular, not side-to-side, where up-and-down would be parallel.) Though, that’s probably related to art being informed by reality, and like 99% (or more) of women not being busty enough to do it that way, and “IRL” paizuri being done the “normal” way. Anyway, it’s different, but a good different, and I think it speaks well of your creativity and imagination. Most artists, even ones who draw women as busty as your Toph, wouldn’t think of that. As always, great job, may the Muses continue to inspire you. (I say that because “keep up the good work” implicitly expects you to keep this up, and I don’t like to pressure people to make stuff.)
Benny
Nice titfuck scene, i didn't knew it existed in this position though. It's almost like she's sitting on Toph, really interesting.
Graham
Her face in the final sketch is so cute~!
