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Toph Heavy Part 3 - Chapter 3 - Page 4 Render WIP
🕑 Added 2023-12-08 07:53:21 +0000 UTCNormally I'd put this in the WIP tier but I want feedback from anyone about this. I've been struggling with this render for the past few days. This is one of my favorite pages and so I'm being a little more picky than usual. I'm not sure about the rim light which is why it isn't in the second panel yet. I'm going to take a break from it, work on some other things, and let my mind reset. Hopefully, I'll make better decisions when I come back to it. In the meantime, I'd like to know your thoughts about what I've got so far.
Comments
Hugh Phillips
Isn't the rim up too high to even be in the second panel?
Benny
Apart from the rim light, is there anything else bothering you with this page ?
