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Toph Heavy Part 3 - Page 20/21 - Final REDO
🕑 Added 2023-04-07 18:09:43 +0000 UTCHey. We're starting to post Chapter 2 publicly, and as I go through these pages I feel like I need to add stuff or redraw things. Part of this is because of what's going on in my personal life, and my intense need to distract myself. So I remade this page in a fit of "this needs to be better!" and realized the next morning that I still liked the other page. I saw a narrative opportunity and decided to take it and I'm keeping both pages. I redid the dialogue and altered the lighting to make it more consistent.
There is a version where you can see Toph's eyelashes on page 20, but I think not seeing them sometimes is more sultry.
Also, sorry for the absence. There is going to be another page today. I have a bunch of pages set up to easily finish. I may post a quick sort of explanation of what I've been doing the past month to the WIP tier.
Also Also, if there isn't a commission posted today. It will be posted tomorrow.
All I want to do is work. All I want to do is succeed. I thank you for sticking with me.
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Daniel Onuoha
Nice work. Hope things get better for you soon.
