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Toph Heavy Part 3 - Page 22 - Final
🕑 Added 2023-01-08 08:58:44 +0000 UTCSo I completely redid this page. It's similar to the original, but tells the story better. Toph looks on model (for this comic) and I like how it turned out a lot more than the original page. The only thing I'm unsure of is the sound effects. I may remove the "gloop gloop." What are your thoughts?
I think I'm probably going to redo parts of the next page as well for the sake of consistency.
Comments
Wait
the earth-sense works well on the updated page
ForeverAflame
I don't like sound effects, but these latest pages have been top quality, especially in terms of lighting.
