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Pages 33 and 34 WIP
🕑 Added 2023-05-03 07:27:20 +0000 UTCI'm still working on Page 33. I'm trying to get the background to the place where I want it. The first and second panel are still barren, but everything I add doesn't seem to work. I know Panel 2 needs the most work because the color right now kind of implies that the camera is pointed towards the floor and that doesn't jive with the perspective of the character. I think I need to figure out Panel 2 before I can fix Panel 1. Panel 3 is probably going to need motion lines to emphasize Azula and sort of blot out the background. I'm pretty happy with the backgrounds of Panel 4 and 5.
Page 34 is coming along a little better, but I still feel like it's missing something. This is the grand return of Azula to the comic so I'd like to be really good.
