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Part 3 - Page 00b - Sketch
🕑 Added 2022-01-28 21:25:56 +0000 UTCThis is the second page added to the beginning of the comic. From here, I just need to redo a page, and fix some panels and the sketch phase will be done. YAY! From there it's inking, flatting, rendering, lettering. Each of these processes will be much quicker than the sketching phase largely because the heavy lifting has been done by the writing/thumbnailing/sketching. The only thing I need to do is not fuck up.
For those who are wondering why I added this page, one of the main plot points is that Toph likes these... encounters, but has a tough time "arriving." This was kind of a big part of the comic to this point. So at the very beginning, despite all of Sokka's efforts she's not "getting there". I added these two pages to really drive that home. After her encounter with Azula, getting off is effortless for her. Azula did something to her that will get resolved in part 4 (if I ever get to part 4)
It's funny, I had an art friend look at the comic on the whole and he said it was too long and repetitive, and I'm like "yeah, exactly, that's the point."
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colin burke
I really hope part 4 makes it!
