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Toph Heavy Part 3 - Pages 1 and 2 - Sketches and Thumb
🕑 Added 2020-10-30 18:36:35 +0000 UTCApologies for the delay. There was some shit involving disease, injury, and my family that took massive priority and it set me back by two weeks. Truth be told, I'm still a little under the weather, but I really want to start posting what I'm working on.
I finished the manuscript; a small 5.5inch x 8.5 inch sketch book full of "pre-sketch" work of the comic. It's all written and planned out, so the hard part is over. In the end it turned out to be 93 pages.
The break down is:
16 pages of non lewd set up
1 last page with Sokka
62 pages of Azula
10 pages of Paizuri w/ different partners because I wanted draw more Paizuri in this one
4 pages of a special guest
I kind of want it to be an even 100, but I can't think of what else to add at this point.
Finally, I want to stress that this isn't going to be like Part 2 with a completed colored page every week. I am going to be working it on stages instead of by page. All of the Manuscript, then all of the clean sketch, then all of the inks, and so on. I will be working Monday through Friday and uploading here way more regularly.
Once it's done there will be a huge drop of the entire thing. Until then, you guys are the only ones that are seeing this. Thank you for your patronage, and I hope you enjoy part 3.
Edit: I ALMOST FORGOT. The script. I don't want to keep you guys waiting as to what's being said.
Page 1
Toph narrating: When morning came, I gave him one last farewell present to remember me by.
Sokka: I can't believe how good this feels. At first it doesn't feel like much of anything but the next thing you know you...
Sokka: Ahhh!
Toph: Hehe.
Sokka: You're one of a kind Toph.
Toph: I know.
Voices in the distance: Sokka! Sokka where are you!
Sokka: Time to go.
Toph: Aw.
Page 2
Toph Narrating: I waved goodbye in the vague direction I assumed Appa was going.
Guard: Ahem.. ma'am? They're gone.
Toph: Phew
Toph: That was the best birthday ever!
Guard: Would you like us to clean up the cave?
Toph: Nah, it's fine. Sokka and I cleaned up before he left.
Guard: By clean up I hope you mean actually clean up and not "bury in rubble"
Toph: ...
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That's the tentative dialogue. It could change but it's the general jist of what's going on.
Comments
Benny
Special guest huh ? But who can it be ? ๐ค Anyway, it's cool to see you're back with Melon Lord
Seriously it's been a hell of a year but I'm glad to see some of the results of your hard work. No matter what though health and family always take priority though. Also no spoilers but any chance of seeing any of the other characters feature? Regardless eager to see what the next part has in store, looking forward to it.
Tiptop
Glad to hear things are stable enough for you to get this rolling. I'm looking forward to it.
