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Wip-news №83.5
🕑 Added 2024-10-31 07:32:43 +0000 UTC~Hi^^ Dear native English speakers!
Please take a look at this file. Here is a translation made by the editor. If the translation is good, then say so and the editing of the rest of the text will continue. If the translation is mediocre, then I will find another editor.
Text at the beginning of the game:
https://mega.nz/file/MZpS2LQD#8apHt82tYthuugJyJqSj3TJVKslbf3Ey7OpoRQjjr_4
Example where is the text:
Your opinion is very important to me and to update the game!^^
Comments
Zach
I don't read or speak a lick of Russian, but with some context clues I can figure out what the AI portion says. The human edited is definitely better. If you want help editing the English content of the game, I would be happy to help with grammar and contextual fluidity.
DoctorDiscord
Human edited is infinitely better than what the AI spat out. But like TJab said above, it just needs a little bit of polish.
TJab
I'd change the first two sentences to: "Are you afraid of being discriminated against? Don't worry, it's a thing of the past!" Also, SWINE appears to be misspelled as SWIN.
Henrik
The AI version does barely take grammar and metaphoric speech into consideration. The human edited one is absolutely good enough for the game experience.
