C. W. March
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Master of One Chapter 4
🕑 Added 2024-12-13 03:10:54 +0000 UTCI'm enjoying how this story is starting to shape up. I feel like introducing one of the longer-term conflicts immediately is the right call here, because it acts as a good way to give a kind of thesis statement about the themes.
Which sounds incredibly pretentious, when I say it, but I'm just going to stick with it for now.
I like this version of Yuuna a lot better. She felt a little too bitter last time, and I feel like it was dragging down the whole tone of the book. This one isn't much softer, but she's got a little more grace about her.
