C. W. March
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Augur B2 Chapters 11 & 12
🕑 Added 2024-11-08 04:18:38 +0000 UTCI finished my revised version of Chapter 11, and am now working through a complete re-write of 12. I'm keeping the main story beats the same, but am trying to change the mood some - I want to soften and build Tzila's character a little more before the breaking, and I want to make the post-Janssens mood lighter again. The original take on Tzila's character kinda dragged the mood down until the very end, and I want to warm things up a little.
12 is still in progress, so the current version ends before the climax of the party where Tzila reveals her hidden fantasy- I'll finish that in the next day or two and then try to make sure the scenes where she's miserable about having revealed it don't break the new mood I'm trying to keep in the next few chapters.
