C. W. March
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Master of One Chapter 4 rewrite
🕑 Added 2024-10-05 17:00:13 +0000 UTCAlso a handful of changes to the first three chapters, but those are pretty sparse. About the only one of those worth calling out is that the fight with the bandits now starts with "Encounter: Bandits (3)" instead of just "Bandits (3)". The addition of that one word doesn't sound too significant, but part of the point of the whole setting is that everyone is being judged on how they act and react - having the system provide the information that this is an "Encounter" instead of just three guys actually changes the context pretty significantly. The words don't appear until the moment it turns into an actual fight though, so I don't think it's too much.
I rewrote the second half of Yuuna's dialogue to give some information about what "Aura Access" means (which was previously summarized in the first couple paragraphs of chapter 5.) It's not a huge change overall, but felt like it flowed better.
