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[Re:Cursed] Chapter 54: Witnessing the Forbidden

🕑 Added 2025-03-17 04:39:13 +0000 UTC

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Vlad Parmus

Thanks for the sacrifice! Nyx isn't human is she? The curses, the high mental resistance, Eyeball calling the black hole their home, "Nyx didn’t feel appalled by the idea of losing her humanity" current theory: Nyx is partially some sort of creature from the abyss.

Summer Coff

Hit enter too early. Wonder if that tremor could be felt from the surface.

Summer Coff

Hm

TheBotler

Saw the edits, great work!

TheBotler

Fair, dont lose the creative idea juice XD

Joroboros

thanks. That last line i kinda skipped forward to write the next chap cause i didn't want to lose the thought while i had it, and when i went back, i forgot to continue the paragraph, haha.

TheBotler

"meant she did fared better than most" fared->fare Unless you drop the "did" which would make the original "fared" correct Thank you for the chapter and hard work! Also I'm not sure where this was going or if it ended on "that anything" but it doesn't quite make sense if it does. It sounds like there was supposed to be something after the "anything" "Considering she’d originally thought her chitinous hands were pointless in her last life, making the assumption that anything"


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