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[KoJ] Interlude VII: The Dive

🕑 Added 2025-01-11 12:52:40 +0000 UTC

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Napalm078

"Only the odd glimmer of light from random directions — like momentary replications of the torch floating before her — did she know they’d begun to appear." *Only by the odd glimmer "She watched carefully as the light grew brighter, certain that there was nothing to fear by its approach, but wary non-the-less." *approach, but wary nonetheless. I'm not sure why you use hyphens when it's a perfectly valid word. "Ceph simple watched as Hirsh finally pulled himself back in line with Albin and herself, while his two passengers realised they now had an audience." *Ceph simply watched as Hirsh "Tavi was quick to spin around Hirsh’s slender inner torso and place himself on the antlers over the mans head, acting like he hadn’t been hiding inside the mage’s cage." *antlers over the man's head, acting like "Hirsh had lit a torch of his own, but as a mage, that was not the only light he relied." *the only light on which he relied. "The discrepancy between when a creature could ignore a portal, and when it struck it dead in place was not something Ceph could understand." *and when it stuck it dead in Not sure if this one is needed. "Often, they thought they saw something approaching, only for it to be a section of wall to float where it shouldn’t be." *section of wall floating where it

Summer Coff

Finally, we learn how portals work! Hey, was there always a big wide one at the bottom of the pit?

J

It-’-s light wasn’t enough to see the walls Ceph simpl-e-+y+ watched as Hirsh finally pulled that was not the only light he relied +on+ rose from the inscriptions winding +around+ his antlers it was like one point -is-+of+ space was linked only for it to be a section of wall -to float-+floating+ where it shouldn’t be. Countless-ly- +times+, Ceph saw both herself


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