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[KoJ] Epilogue (Book 1)

🕑 Added 2024-12-26 21:58:26 +0000 UTC

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Napalm078

Woot Woot! "Everyone with functioning limbs is going to be important if we want to survive." Imagine having limbs.

Napalm078

"When the Titan Alps first fell, terror engulfed the nation." *Alps first fell, terror had engulfed the nation. "The Titan Alps’ partial collapse had sent and instant, terrible fear through all." *collapse had sent an instant, terrible fear "The only question was how long." *was how long it would take. "Besides, what benefit could these isolationists actually be?" *Besides, of what benefit could "The city already cracking at the seams." *The city was already cracking at "All noises deafened by ash permeating the air." *All noises were deafened by ash permeating the air.

Summer Coff

oh, that's interesting. So only "existing" requires energy. If you think about them compared to the Titans, that's much less harmful to the world as a whole, huh?

Joroboros

variable on which is in 'reality' for longer. The mass that is in the 'personal fabric' essentially doesn't require the energy to sustain, so our snake is in a bit of a beneficial position because of its ability to live with a minimal energy consumption if it so chooses. for example: the hunt after being stuck in the abyss so long. Snake couldn't be satisfied with only a single beast because they'd been staying in their larger form so long, so they had to go on a spree to consume more.

Summer Coff

Half which body weight, though? Their max weight?

Joroboros

For the snake to sustain themselves? maybe about half their body weight every month. To grow is considerably more, and far less effective if the creatures they eat weaker creatures. (consider it like a hyle density in increase in stronger beasts.) The aed, by their very nature, consume far more to sustain themselves than any non-elemental. The amount they need to grow is the same as other species (a considerable amount) Every creature can grow (in strength) by consuming. Some simply have an easier time consuming than others, which requires the use of the ritual for those that can't swallow mountains (and mountains of flesh) whole to significantly improve their amassed strength.

Summer Coff

Actually, genuine question: how much nutrition do they need to subsist at this point, versus to grow? They and Solvei have a similar issue where their means of cultivating power is the same as their means of preventing starvation, so it's hard to get a handle on how much they really need. And this feels thematically relevant.

Summer Coff

Sorry, Ceph, but there may not be much to find down there... I wonder if they would return to the warped tunnels now even if they could? It feels like it's clear that their main food source has to be in the Other Side now, whether they like it or not.

J

-Not two years ago, even in the height of war, the glistening appearance would never been allowed to fall.-Not even two years ago, during the height of war, would the glistening appearance have been allowed to fall. =I'd maybe suggest swapping "fall" for "falter", but that's a recommendation and not a correction. Trying to keep this to the original wording would have been tough, so I did a bit of word swapping in this sentence. -p-+P+erfecting their Besides, what benefit could these isolationists actually -be-+provide+? This is also more recommendation than correction. As an aside from corrections, I'm curious as to whether the Beyond or the Titans are the real 'big bad(s)' of the series. I'm sure that will be cleared up in time though.


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