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[KoJ] Interlude VI: Blizzard

🕑 Added 2024-11-27 23:03:24 +0000 UTC

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knew -there-+this+ wasn't the time ==it might incite a grudge neither the mercenaries of Kalma’s Pit, or Meja’s capital yet rose within it == Had to go to desktop for this one. It's an instance where I get the intent, but the particular wording is a bit off. I'd maybe recommend something like "it might yet incite a grudge within it neither the mercenaries of Kalma's Pit or the people of Meja's Capital could bear". shard sen-d-+t+ the chill wasn’t slice+d+ apart A hundred metres long, and +its+ thickness twice that of the albanic it attack-s-+ed+.

Joroboros

Maybe for a fight later on, but this one I feel is too important to not be in the snakes head for it.

Trasen56

I would actually be interested in seeing the entirety of this fight from Cephs persepctive. We already know how Joro fights, and it would let us see ot from the outside as well as give perspective on his strength relative to the world he has entered.

Summer Coff

A hundred meters! I feel like that's more than we last checked. That meal in 47 must have had a lot of energy altogether. Also, Ceph's a good egg. She knows about racism.


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