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[YF] Chapter 234: Expansion

🕑 Added 2024-10-02 03:04:16 +0000 UTC

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Joroboros

That's good. I've found that while dictating, i can get the chapter direction out quick, but the prose is... well, horrible. so ever since I've taken to rewriting the speech paragraph by paragraph. read what was intended, then redo it so it actually sounds good. Dunno if its actually faster, but it helps me be more consistent.

Jethro H

I did like the way this chapter flows; the narration is smooth and natural, as far as I can tell at least.


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