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STNS: Chapter 262

🕑 Added 2023-02-17 16:38:38 +0000 UTC

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Dotair

Fair enough, I know my response would have been more along the lines of ‘He did what!?’ Kinda stuff I trust you

It was. TBF, he was pretty shocked to hear someone tried to drug Zhou Lihua in broad daylight in the middle of a party celebrating her victory in the alchemy tournament. I felt like that was the best he could do, but I'll see if I can't give him a better response. I'm pretty sure I can improve this during my rewrites.

Dotair

Kinda feel that Jians response to her telling him she was just drugged should be a bit more than just ‘uh…’ the rest felt fine but that response felt weak, especially from him

Maybe her heart was hamming it up... Lol. Nice catch.

Bart Ursulla Van de Velde aka High Four

"Her heart was hammeing." Hammering? Thanks for the chapter.

Kconraw

Well, at least finding a way to be with her isn’t completely insurmountable without her leaving the family. Though preforming a great feat will be a challenge. Thx for the chapter.


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