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STNS: Chapter 233

🕑 Added 2023-01-16 14:37:56 +0000 UTC

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Thank you!

I noticed the wrong name used “Even I am surprised by the talent being displayed here,” said Zhou Chaoqie. this should be branch head, Zhou Chaoxiang speaking.

Yeah. I was thinking about that too, but I felt like this would be better. Wu Jian doesn't really need development, so this would just be him showing off, but Hou Jingshu could really use some more development. I thought having a rival would help her improve.

I'm glad you've been enjoying the story. I just realized after someone mentioned it that several of the fights have been out of place and I think I even skipped some fights and forgot to mention other aspects that I had written about previously. I just added some more content starting with chapter 225 if you want to go back and re-read.

Kconraw

Same here. Didn’t notice anything was wrong till it was pointed out that Wu Jian’s last fight was a semifinal match. I was actually hoping he’d face one of the girls in the semifinals so he could go against both in this tournament. Thx for the chapter.

Tim Nielsen

LOL, well I did notice a little bit incongruency but it still seemed to flow all right with me if maybe a little out of sequence but I really didn't really give it that much thought. I was just too excited for the story and was reading along enjoying things sorry I couldn't be more help. 🤔😁

Ayce-o-Spades

It didn’t actually seem that messed up till you actually named all of the opponents that were left in the final eight.

Ayce-o-Spades

I think it was 230. It was all good and well till you skipped Jingshu’s fight and Hou Gun’s fight after Mei Xilans fight.

I actually added a quick fix to chapter 227 for that, though I didn't add it onto patreon. I'm considering adding a bit more. I'll have to do an overhaul of chapter 229 to fix the big issue. I'm glad you noticed the same problem.

Daniel Glasson

226-227 is where it started with the fight where they realized something was off about Ye Chun. 226 ended with them wondering what the hell was happening with him and then nothing in the next chapter about that fight at all. After that, 229 seems to be where the trouble really starts to kick in

Yeah. I agree with you. I'm gonna try and fix that. Can you tell me where it felt like the fights got confusing? I feel like it was chapter 229, but I'd like to know if anyone feels like it was somewhere else.

Daniel Glasson

Not going to lie, the tournament has been a bit confusing, though the fights have been great. Just more of a reason to check out the "polished" chapters when they are released on Tapas and in the books then


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