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STnS: Chapter 169

🕑 Added 2022-11-02 16:26:46 +0000 UTC

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Ayce-o-Spades

“I know I’m asking a lot. I will understand if you say no, but I wanted to suggest is(It?) because…” awesome chapter btw!

Tanner Lovelace

BTW in several previous chapters I see you used the name Hou Gin which is quite confusing. Perhaps some name quality control would be a good idea!

Kconraw

Thx for the chapter

Bart Ursulla Van de Velde aka High Four

“Thank you. I know I’m putting you in a difficult position,” Wu Meiying (Hou Jingshu?) said softly." Great chapter again.

Everything drives me to drink. Resisting the urge to drink makes me want to drink. Lol. I'll make those fixes.

Tanner Lovelace

So, you're saying your story is driving you to drink, eh? :-) Thanks for the clarification.

Thanks for catching that!

It's Hou Gun. I was probably thinking about how much I want a drink when I wrote this. Gimme some gin.

Tanner Lovelace

So, is the oldest brother named "Hou Gin" or "Hou Gun"? You used both of those twice so it's not obvious which one is correct.

Daniel Glasson

Caught a small mistake. "Are you remember her goodbye kiss?"


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