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STnS: Chapter 153

🕑 Added 2022-10-14 16:03:33 +0000 UTC

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I figured. I'll go back through my story and fix this so it is more consistent.

Alin Simionoiu

I was referring to the inconsistency

Not everyone calls the technique name, but some do because it helps them visualize their attack. Wu Jian doesn't. Saying that, I feel like I've been inconsistent with this, so I might go back and change things a bit.

Alin Simionoiu

Since when did they start calling the technique (is the right word?) name? I could be wrong, but I think they started doing that in the previous chapter.

Ayce-o-Spades

Yeah Jingshu would smoke his ass.

If the necklace was destroyed, Wu Jian would be fucked.

Bart Ursulla Van de Velde aka High Four

I never learned English at school and its not my native language. Since i learned English by translating song lyrics and watching movies with subtitles, finding the typos helps me with learning English.

Ayce-o-Spades

Lol I was thinking about mentioning the typos but I knew you would take care of it and do a much better job.

Bart Ursulla Van de Velde aka High Four

"A wave of flames swept over the scorpion and cauterized the new wound before it coiled (could? ) regenerate. Now it only had its stinger and acid." "“It’s stinger is now gone! Let’s try to remove its limbs before it can burrow into the sand again!” Hou Jingshu ordered." Since a few moments earlier it was mentioned that it only had its stinger and acid i think its "its pincer is now gone!" here. "He coated his blade with the Dao of Space, creating a sharp cutting edge that sliced through the magical beast’s carapace like wheat before a scythe. The sword penetrated the creature’s blade (body or carapace or armor?). Its body shuddered briefly before it died. " Great chapter again.

Bart Ursulla Van de Velde aka High Four

Im thinking the same thing here.

Ayce-o-Spades

Im thinking she saw the medallion/necklace and fainted. Since his chest would’ve been exposed.

Tanner Lovelace

Or did he lose his mask?

Tanner Lovelace

Did his medallion that Meiying gave him get destroyed with his armor? Did Jingshu recognize him and faint?

Ayce-o-Spades

Ohh shit! I’m almost positive I know what happened there at the end, and let me tell you I’m hyped.


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