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Severing Time: Chapter 40 (End of Volume 1)

🕑 Added 2022-04-18 14:45:51 +0000 UTC

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Kconraw

"She looked back at him and their shared a smile." Should be they instead of their. Great chapter and enjoyable ending to book1.

Bart Ursulla Van de Velde aka High Four

Love the story. I'm glad i sterted reading this, its a wonderful reading experience.

Michael Jackson

Awesomeness

There will be a few time skips in the next volume, but I'm still laying out the groundwork for future volumes when cultivation will play a huge factor.

Benjamin Collins

Is there going to be another time jump soon, it feels like this volume was to introduce characters and build up back stories but that the meat of the story will be when he's able to really cultivate

Yeah, I felt like this battle shouldn't be too long, especially with how injured Wu Jian was. Drawing it out would make it feel like I was padding my word count.

Thanks!

Thank you!

Daniel Glasson

I like how the battle wasn't drawn out. It was hard, fast and brutal

Paigeon

Hard and fast. How it should be.

Wow fantastic battle and turn of events! Just wow!


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