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WIEDERGEBURT Act VII: Chapter 42

🕑 Added 2021-11-29 14:59:18 +0000 UTC

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Daniel Glasson

Caught another. "There was a small dispute trading dispute between Midgard and the Endless Desert"

Yeah, there won't be a sequel series. That ending was simply meant to show their story would continue, but at this point, they are so powerful that no story I write would have the same tension and plot driven content as this one.

Jamie Celtic

Really enjoyed the series and looking forward to the new stuff in the light novels , i dont suppose we will see a sequel series with eryk and family in space will we?

DBZ was based on The Journey to the West, which is a story about Sun Wukong from Chinese mythology. I didn't know this until much later myself. I'm glad you enjoyed the story.

Bart Ursulla Van de Velde aka High Four

I thought it was DBZ and not indian/chinese mythologie (but that could be because i'm an otaku (⌒_⌒;) ) loved the story and just like everyone else i will buy the finished volumes, and i am looking forward to the appearances of eryk and wives in other stories. ON TO THE NEXT STORY IT IS XD.

Stephen

Well that would be interesting if one of the WIVES sired a child…But if any of them did I suppose it would be Kari ;-)

I thought about doing that, but it didn't feel right. Not everyone is gonna be ready for children right away, and some might not even want their own kids. I thought it would be better to let their personalities dictate whether they would sire a child or not.

I was kinda of hoping to find all of his wives had at least one kid. And maybe another kid with Fay.

Lol. You're close. The name was inspired by the story Journey of the West, which is about Son Goku, or Son Wukong, who was the inspiration for Son Goku in DBZ. Similarly, Yama, Nimbus, and Brahma arebased on Indian and Chinese mythology.

Ashly E Wood

Yama, Goku, Nimbus, Brahma(n)... DBZ or just Indian mythology?

Ashly E Wood

Am I crazy or was that DBZ?

I'm probably gonna extend the light novel version a bit so you get more content. I'm happy you enjoyed this story.

Jim Payne

I'm so glad we got Kayli back, I hope we can get more of that in the published books! Thanks for the wonderful story!

Thanks! I plan to work really hard to make the published content even better. I'm thinking of adding extra chapters, more development, and maybe focus on some of the more prominent side characters.

Great story Brandon. I greatly appreciated the ride and look forward to your next work. I also look forward to the published volumes and the extra content. Keep it up.

Tim Nielsen

Lilac and Sana froze at my froze. I found this little typo. It's right at the beginning of the part where Eric asked them what happened reference to the chemicals being spilled on the dress.

I'm glad you enjoyed the ending. I did leave it open like that because I'm entertaining the possibility of having other stories told where Eryk and his ladies make cameo appearances.

Jim Moak

Such an awesome ending. Keep the peace, but hint at something more. I'd love to read another series with them. Multiverse/Cosmere perhaps?

Glad you enjoyed it. :-)

Thank you!

The finished light novels should be even better. I'm planning to add more content, expand on some of the characters... and you also get the awesome art. Should be fun. ;-)

rykott

Been a hell of a ride. I'll keep picking up the finished volumes and once it's all complete give it a re-read from those. Onto the next story it is.

Daniel Glasson

Caught a mistake. "I have defected a signal from the Flying Nimbus".

Paigeon

Nice ending. Now, i'm looking forward for your new series.

I'm glad you liked it. I thought an open end would be nice since it gives readers the chance to imagine what kinda shenanigans Eryk and his women will get up to in outer space. I'm also thinking of connecting other series to this one, but I haven't decided if I will quite yet.

Tim Nielsen

Heh, an assertive Siv it's nice to see. Love the ending and the open end who knows but regardless I am looking forward to new series that you are starting. 🤓😎


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