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WIEDERGEBURT Act VII: Chapter 21

🕑 Added 2021-09-16 13:22:36 +0000 UTC

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I might do something like that in the LN version, but I haven't written anything for the web novel.

Bart Ursulla Van de Velde aka High Four

Do we get a scene where raul gets intimate with his girlfriends. Loved the chapter.

Probably, yes. Thank you for catching that.

Paigeon

fierce congratulations from and a far more polite one from Feinrea. -> i think here are missing at least a "her dad" after the first from

Justin

Bingo.

Thank you for catching this. I'll fix it.

Oops. Right. They would be half-siblings, huh. I'll fix that.

Justin

For the record, Feinrea’s kid would be Fay’s sibling. Not niece or nephew.

Tanner Lovelace

“Feinrea looked quite feint” <— it’s spelled “faint”. The spelling you used means “to bluff”.


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