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WIEDERGEBURT Act VII: CHapter 23

🕑 Added 2021-09-23 13:54:16 +0000 UTC

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Good catch. Thank you.

The Agent Colson

blaze about this -> blase about this

Thank you for catching that mistake. I appreciate it. I'll go into my manuscript and correct that.

Ashly E Wood

Towards the end when you talk about Chloe listening... "She had surreptitiously slipped a down between her legs and was rubbing her clit as she listened." You missed hand. "She had surreptitiously slipped a hand down between her legs..."

Thank you! I'm anticipating it greatly too. I'm waiting for the proofed copy to arrive.

Tim Nielsen

I am loving the story still can't wait for the book to come out so I can add it to my collection. 😁😎

Tim Nielsen

Help with me that, is what you had written, I think you meant what I previously texted.😋

Tim Nielsen

Do you think you can help me with that?.....

Can’t wait for Chole and tora to get in on the action

Everyone knows this princess has no shame. XD

David Fletcher

Lin saying she has no shame like it was a surprise hahahaha


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