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WIEDERGEBURT Act VI: Chapter 47

🕑 Added 2021-06-28 13:47:14 +0000 UTC

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It looks like I'm missing some words in there. I'll go and fix it. Thank you for pointing this out.

“Valkyries had very streamlined armor that looked like, with wings on their helmets, thin armor that had glowing runes etched onto the surface, and swords or halberds.“ This sentence seemed difficult to read or at least incomplete.

Rey T Nufable

Also" Tyr felt his face burn as "she" rushed out of the office.

Thank you!

Thank you for catching that.

Daniel Glasson

I caught another. Right before it switched to Eryk's perspective, you had Tor as Tow.

Tanner Lovelace

Great chapter. One small error I saw. “Doing that would only insight outrage and panic.” Should be “incite” instead of insight.


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