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WIEDERGEBURT Act VI: Chapter 42

🕑 Added 2021-06-10 13:02:59 +0000 UTC

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Stephen

The man stood up, revealing a male with a strong jaw, a double chin, and short blond hair?? How can someone have a strong jaw AND a double chin?!

total snort laugh at the last sentance

Thanks. I'll try to fix those sentences up. I'm glad you enjoy the dynamics between Eryk and his women. :-)

Tim Nielsen

Shadow Walking was an ability I rarely used since it wasn’t all that power. Powerful? Appearing within the shadow of the Elite, I activated quickly. A large spike of darkness penetrated his back went out his chest, and lifted him on the ground. This sentence is a little confusing to me and I think its lift him off the ground not on the ground.🤔😎 And if you don’t want "ME" to kick your ass from here to Miðgarðr, you will get your hands off my wife.” I like the play between the girls and Eryk. 😎😎

I think there should be a ‘me’ between want and to in the last paragraph


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