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WIEDERGEBURT Act VI: Chapter 41

🕑 Added 2021-06-07 14:18:02 +0000 UTC

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Looting Pillager

So I have tried to bite my tongue for a bit but the whole all the bad guys are Rapists trope you have going on here devalues your villains and the society they come from. I mean if everyone Eryk and Co. fight in this part of the series has no value because they are the kind of person hardened criminals would murder just to not breath the same air as then not only is there no tension in fighting them but there is less moral quandary in killing them than there is in killing a beast wandering in the woods. At least the beast belongs where it is. What you have done is made an army of Epstiens where the only real tension is how many different ways they can hang themselves with toilet paper. They are less interesting than the sekbeist armies from earlier to be honest.

Paigeon

I Like your surprises in a story

Gonna have some surprises in store for you with that.

Thanks for catching that. Glad you enjoyed the chapter.

Tim Nielsen

The runes underneath her lit up. Lines of power traveled across the ground, spreading across the pass, along the floor, up the cliff walls. They went passed Klaue and his forces, extending for a kilometer before stopping. 🤔 Klaue is not with his men at this time in the story. 😎 I like this chapter too.

Paigeon

Nice Chapter. The big, bad Asshole is dead. Now, to the bigger, but not so bad asshole named Tyr


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