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WIEDERGEBURT Act VI: Chapter 45

🕑 Added 2021-06-21 12:56:47 +0000 UTC

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Don't say that! You might really trip a doom flag! :O

"It was perfect." ... anyone else feel a doom flag

Robert Wrigley

Sure, but while Tor would be petulant, Tora would be fucking petulant.

Tor might also be petulant....

rykott

"Kari wanted to roll her eyes at the sound of Tor’s petulant words" Pretty sure that's meant to be Tora.

Tim Nielsen

I may be late to the party reading these chapters but I am still enjoying, this is one of my favorite stories. 😎

Tim Nielsen

Once te knowledge of his foul methods, .....te or the,🧐

Thanks for catching those.

Good eye. I only caught "police/polite".

Daniel Glasson

Caught 2 mistakes in the discussion between Tora and Kari. You have "rune away" instead of "rune array" and "police" instead of "polite"


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