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WIEDERGEBURT Act VI: Chapter 20

🕑 Added 2021-03-25 14:49:38 +0000 UTC

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Austin lloyd

Hahaha

This is wuxia. A coup must always happen. Always. Lol. XD

Tim Nielsen

I was wondering when that trope of a coup was going to rear its ugly head.

But at the same time it seams the Gudomelig aren't interested in taking the fight to the Sekbeists and are just waiting for the inevitable combat to begin, if they aren't actively recruiting into their military and no one really cares what the Sekbeists are doing you end up loosing fighters in your military without ever gaining new members thus the military shrinks with nothing really happening to increase the ranks.

Tanner Lovelace

And, when you consider, this isn't really a feeder school for the military, but rather an elite institution that's meant to train heroes, then you can't really consider it elite if there are so many. If everyone is a hero, then no one is.

Tanner Lovelace

So, part of it isn't just the raw number. You also state that the northern division only has 12,000 members. I think there were, what, 4 or 5 divisions, which means that the entire army itself is only about 50,000. Consider the enrollment of West Point vs all the people in our military. The number actually in the military dwarfs that enrolled in it's premiere school. If here you say your school has more than half again the entire number in your army, that's just ridiculous.

Daniel Glasson

And suddenly, boss music begins to play...

And besides none of the building need to appear to be so large as to hold that number, if they can use runes to gather a certain concept into a room for meditation purposes they can surely use them to make small buildings larger on the inside.

I wouldn't change it, it brings to focus just how many more gudomelig there really are, and the concept of only have the same number of people the human realm (Smallest of the realms) could have would not assist in this number crunch.

So I should have less people. I can see that. I wanted to showcase how big this place was, but if it pulls you out of the story, I'll change it to maybe 3,000-5,000 people instead. Thank you for bringing this to my attention.

Tanner Lovelace

Good story, but one part jumped out at me as unbelievable. The thing I had the most trouble with was 30,000 people at dinner. That’s essentially a stadium’s worth of people. I could have believed 3,000, but 30,000 seems like a step too far.


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