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WIEDERGEBURT Act VI: Chapter 17

🕑 Added 2021-03-15 14:56:29 +0000 UTC

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I'm good like that. Next waifu is foul-mouthed.

Yeah. All my chapters on here are raw and unedited, so they can sometimes be decently written or very sloppy depending on how I was doing the day I wrote them. I'm glad you liked the chapter though. I've always said that the number of years one has lived can never trump how much someone has experienced.

Looting Pillager

There are a few grammar and spelling errors in this one but I like this one quite a bit. I think the concept of Eryk being the youngest and yet most experienced at life is awesome.

rykott

Well played. You figured out how to add a school arc when the main character is over 30 :P I'm cool with the foul-mouthed, big titted school girl ;D

I hope that makes sense.

Paigeon

Ah, Ok.

The Concept of Negation is the full name for the Void, which is like an extension of the concept.

Paigeon

"Concept of Negation" wasn't it void and not negation?

Rey T Nufable

Shouldn't it be bookshelves of gold not good?

I plan on adding a few more harem members. It might happen more slowly than other series, but I gotta feed the harem some times.

Time will play an important role in this story. :-)

Yes. I noticed that and fixed it in my latest manuscript. Thanks for pointing it out. :-)

Synn Shadow

I think you might have made a blunder. You mentioned that death would show as red in the absorption stone, but after you made it appear as black, which you mentioned is for dimension.

Daniel Glasson

I wonder if Time will show up considering his little adventure at the very start of the series

Grant

I think you used realized instead of related when Eryk asked about Tora's relatives, but aside from that interesting chapter. I do wonder if Eryk will gain additional harem members since he is away from all four of his wives. That would be hilarious. I am guessing Eryk will try to pick up dimension and creation while in the school since he wants to travel through the dimensions and he mentioned learning creation would be useful. Can't wait to find out.

David Fletcher

The wait to see what Eryk shows is on


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