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WIEDERGEBURT Act VI: Chapter 6

🕑 Added 2021-02-04 15:22:19 +0000 UTC

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rykott

I have a feeling Eryk might not be pleased with this :'D

Paigeon

And it's time for the one and only phoenix pill use

Don't worry. I'm not the type to kill harem members. :-) Unless it is in the past timeline. :3

Yes. It is Lin. The Great Overlord of the Seventh Relam is a heartless person...well, sorta. You'll learn more later.

Thank you for catching all these mistakes. :-)

Tanner Lovelace

“This creature must have been a lot sturdier than the light beast because she didn’t blow a hole through it.” Should be lightning beast since “this creature” already referred to the light beast.

David Fletcher

Riot for days.

Tanner Lovelace

“She could see the light bird now. It was still fighting against Siv and her stone attacks. “ Should be Lin instead of Siv.

David Fletcher

“She could see the light bird now. It was still fighting against Siv and her stone attacks. “ You meant Lin, right? How can Lin get torn in half after a great first half of the chapter of talking to herself. Heartless!

Daniel Glasson

"Lo and behold, I did discover the god child, but I did discover you two" should have a not after the first discover. And to paraphrase ECW fans, if Lin dies, we riot. Complete with pitchforks and torches


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