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WIEDERGEBURT Act VI: Chapter 14

🕑 Added 2021-03-05 14:53:39 +0000 UTC

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Cjmd224

Happy to help

Thanks for pointing this out. I'm always bad about remembering things like this. I'll go in and fix it.

Cjmd224

The start of the chapter mentions that the party took two days to plan but Frey makes a comment at the end "you haven't even been here a full day yet"

That is probably exactly what I did. I'll have to go back and fix it during my editing. Thanks for pointing this out. That's a pretty messed up sentence.

Paigeon

"Speaking of, I would need to ask Fray if she could find a place where I could sell that would buy the parts from me." This entire sentence Sounds wrong to me, but i'm mit a native speaker. In my opinio, it's read like you corrected the sentence but don't deleted als of the old sentence.

Grant

Kind of wonder what favor Skude would ask for if he won. I suspect he will brag about it right before losing the contest. Time will tell if I am right.


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