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WIEDERGEBURT Act VI: Chapter 3

🕑 Added 2021-01-25 15:17:04 +0000 UTC

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Stephen

Curious why BOTH Lin & Fay have to stay behind - especially if the plan was quick trip with overwhelming fire power.

Yeah. I accidentally wrote it like that, but Miðgarðr is supposed to be the smallest. This will be changed in the published version. It's kept in this web novel version, though, since everything here is unedited content.

Ashly E Wood

I thought Miðgarðr was the largest of the plains/realms, since it was at the bottom. didn't you say the plates got smaller as you went up?

This is my unedited manuscript. I originally used "Plain" but changed it partway through in the published version. Some of the changes made their way into the unedited version as well. Thank you for pointing out that mistake. I'll go in and fix it.

I saw that you have been using both "realm" and "plain" when talking about the Great Overlord. Also you used "combining" not "combing" when Eryk was brushing his wives' hair before they went to bed

rykott

Just the plan in general. To kill the Overlord of the Seventh Plain.

Who's plan?

rykott

I have a feeling not everything is going to go to plan ;D


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