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WIEDERGEBURT Act V: Chapter 30

🕑 Added 2020-11-05 15:10:18 +0000 UTC

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rykott

Oh noes... Fay got herself some fangirls :o

Dennis Erwin

But enlightened platonic discourse isn't nearly as satisfying to read in a Power Fantasy. ;-) I get what you're saying, but muscle-powered medieval cultures always tend to be misogynistic, and our MCs are all in the 1% realm of looks. It's inevitable they're going to draw a lot of leers.

I'm glad you like them! I plan to make them recurring characters.

Yes. Trance-like. I think I'm used to using trans as in transform because of Nyx's abilities in A Most Unlikely Hero. Good catch!

Tanner Lovelace

“trans-like state” I assume this should instead be “trance-like state”?

Personally, I'm bothered by it because it seems like that's how it always is. What all the men (except Eryk apparently) are motivated purely through their lust? It makes it seem like Eryk is somehow so much better than everyone else, when he certainly isn't (excluding spiritual strength obviously). He gets jealous and territorial so he shouldn't be on such a pedestal relative to other characters. I just think it's a little too much. Kari, Fay, Lin and Siv should be able to have normal interactions with men just as much as Eryk has normal interactions with other women. I feel like it's very much lopsided in that regard. I mean this purely constructively of course, I wouldn't still be reading if I didn't like the story overall. Fay getting a fan club is super great.

Tanner Lovelace

Oh my! Lilac and Sana are a hoot! I hope we can see more of them in the future.

It should be very interesting indeed. XD

Figured it was needed at least once. And I'd say it's not that there are a lot of creeps in this world (no more than our own), but Fay, Kari, Lin, and Siv just attract creeps like a rose attracts bees.

Thanks. The fanclub should be kinda fun.

Grant

Ha, this is going to be funny. Fay will be the first alchemist to go from novice to grand master in about a day. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Tim Nielsen

Oh yeah fan club trope that's pretty interesting. Also is it just me or does it seem to be a lot of creeps in this world that are inordinarily lustful for women. 😑

Daniel Glasson

"But she didn't Eryk by her side". Missing the "have". Love the Fay fanclub that's sprouted up


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