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WIEDERGEBURT Act IV: Chapter 21

🕑 Added 2020-07-27 15:19:27 +0000 UTC

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Kconraw

Okay, imagining Lin turning into a giant elemental snake is awesome. That would be a cool fight scene. Hope masters that training before they leave the desert.

Yes

Illiterate Scholar

Yeah, I've been kinda hoping to see some shadow stepping from Eryk, but one other thing I've noticed is that healing with the light element hasn't been mentioned since Act 2. I figured maybe Kari hasn't been healing people because she never got around to learning the Spiritual Techniques needed to heal people, but now that she has reached the 3rd State with Light, she should be able to heal people intuitively, and without needing to learn the technique.

Also, something that Muhammad said was bugging me. Why did he sound like he didn't know that there was a Fourth State of Spiritualism, when Lin knew there were four states? I remember reading in an earlier chapter, back when they were in Nevaria, that Lin stated that she would naturally arrive at the Fourth State of Spiritualism without the need of training

I think that, in addition to my comment on an earlier chapter, it'd be a good idea to have Muhammad's son acting like the last obstacle that Eryk needs to deal with before he frees the lamias. However, instead of killing him he simply incapacitates him and has him become an information source that he gives to the Emperor, which could help implicate the whole Malik Family

Max Pellant

Not only is he at least stage 3 in all the elements, but he also said that he can not reach stage 4 in anything but water and lightning for some reason. The only one of the girls who is not stage 4 is Kari as they have not found the proper core or monster to make her the stage 4 medication.

Thank you. :-)

Looting Pillager

Such a good chapter for beginning a wrap up.

Grant

Well he could come back for revenge after everything blows over. He seemed like the type that poisoned Medusa in the alternate reality. Time paradoxes are so confusing. Another possibility could be that his father sold him into slavery. Seems cold hearted, but I would not put it past Muhammad.

Tim Nielsen

Maybe just to tie up a loose end.

Devin

Zenn you beat me to it! Think it said he was stage 4 in water and lightning and stage 3 in everything else!

You know....I am not sure. I kinda forgot about him. Do you think I should add something to show what happened to him after all this blew over?

Grant

What ever happened to Muhammad's son? I thought he escaped with his father, but I might be wrong. If he was smart he would have abandoned the old snake and fled the city.

Thank you for pointing this out. I sometimes forget the small details of my stories after awhile. I'll go back and make the changes to keep the story consistent.

Zenn

Umm....Eryk has already reached the third stage in the darkness element. He did in act 3 before they went back to the ravine. Although he should be at least stage 3 in all of them since they would of had to go back into the demon beast mountain range anyway to get everyone to stage 4. No reason not to pick up what they needed for the rest of the elemental refining pills. I


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