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WIEDERGEBURT Act IV: Chapter 20

🕑 Added 2020-07-23 14:39:11 +0000 UTC

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Kconraw

After the mini time skip it was stated that Eryk was able to reach the 3rd state with his other elements while his wives could only manage the 2nd state. Couldn't he have used earth to rescue the hostage immediately, then destroy the mercenaries? Also, I've noticed you haven't had Eryk use any other elements since he hit the 4th state. I know he's OP but it was really fun seeing his thought process when using the other elements, since he can now match anyone; besides his wives; with the other elements. Do you plan on having him utilize the other elements more in the future or is his mindset too far on the side of "why bother?"

Because I made a mistake. XD I'll fix that in my manuscript. Thanks for catching it.

I thought that Qawuin was close to being at the Third State of Spiritualism for the Earth element, not Fire. So why was the signal that Eryk got when he used Spiritual Perception red?

He was the best available...but the best is obviously not enough to challenge Eryk and his OPness. On that note, I think part of the problem is no one actually has any information on Eryk in this nation, so they were essentially going in blind and bit off more than they could chew.

Daniel

I think holding a hostage was the *cough* best option at the time. If a 3rd ranked spirualist is a pinnacle existences, then Kassimin finding out that Eryk was above that, fleeing wasn't an option. Of course, the best option, was to find out more about the contract before accepting it. Ego > brains. People hire the best, because they NEED the best. Perhaps, this guy wasn't the best?

Thank you. I thought this was a nice touch. Siv is so quiet I think she's sometimes dismissed and isn't as seen, so I try to let others realize that, yeah, she is kind of a badass. She's just a shy badass. XD

Looting Pillager

Love how Siv was totally dismissed as a threat. Makes it fantastic when she acts. Cannot wait to see her get her slaughter on.

I always find these moments cathartic. :-)

rykott

Ahhh... the joy of assholes finding out they are seriously outmatched ;D

Tim Nielsen

Always fun read thanks for the story.

amazing

While I'm not writing much atm because I am doing editing, I normally write two chapters a day. :-) I spend 8-10 hours writing every day.

Grant

Great chapter. Kassim should have fled as soon as he realized the power difference. Using a hostage was a foolish move. Makes me wonder what Isotep will do now, three assassin groups failed, I would leave town.

Dennis Erwin

Oh that was a great chapter to read. I don't know how you write two huge chapters like this every week while also keeping up with the other projects, but the quality level just stays amazing.

He gonna fucked up good. XD

Lol ownt. Isotep is so screwed.


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