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WIEDERGEBURT Act IV: Chapter 18

🕑 Added 2020-07-16 16:16:08 +0000 UTC

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Illiterate Scholar

Another thing to note that is different between then and now is that 'then' he was in his post-family-murdered I-am-a-monster phase. He hadn't yet met the crippled Fay, who brought him back from his borderline sociopathy.

Daniel Glasson

Didn't think I could dislike anyone more than Grant, but I was wrong. Isotep has taken top spot

Thank you for the suggestion. I'll see if I can incorporate Jahin traveling with the caravan into my story.

We know that Muhammad traveled non-stop to get to Muqadas, but what about his son, Jahin? It might be a good idea to have Muhammad drop him off with the caravans and have him help escort them to Muqadas

Max Pellant

do you think you could post some sort of kill count by the end of this slaver arc? I really want to grasp the sheer number of Malik family people Eryk kills.

Max Pellant

Not only that but the last time Eryk came through here he wasn't planning on returning. It was a one way trip for him so he didn't care how many bridges ger burned. Now, Eryk isn't planning to just beat up the Overlord and then kill himself. He's planning on stopping the overlords and then living happily with his family. That requires connections to be made and maintained if he wanted to have options for after his life's enemies were defeated.

I mean, this IS a wuxia, so... XD

rykott

Eryk is so restrained at the moment. But you just know someone is going to do something dumb and there is gonna be a lot of dead bodies by the time he leaves again ;D

Dennis Erwin

Oops - sorry about that! Lin Ming is the protagonist of Martial World, one of the more popular wuxia novels. He reminds me a lot of Eryk - nice to anyone that's nice to him, but utterly ruthless to anyone who threatens him or his family. Not evil, but possibly a bit sociopathic. That's a good point - I guess he doesn't necessarily want to completely destabilize the region just because the Malik family isn't too savory.

He doesn't care for himself, but Eryk is just passing through. He won't stay in the desert, so he doesn't want his presence to have a huge affect on the political landscape and power structure of the region. I don't know who Lin Ming is, but I can say Eryk is a lot more polite than most wuxia protagonists. Many MCs in wuxia are borderline sociopaths if not outright evil.

Dennis Erwin

Provoking a war of retaliation against the Lamia is a good reason to be circumspect, but I'm not sure I buy the rest. Why would he care about any 'bounty' or the Malik family? He's showing far more restraint this time than the first timeline, and he's more powerful now. If he wanted that auction house and the Malik family minced up into very, very small pieces there wouldn't be anything they could do about it. I guess I've been reading too much other Xanxia lately - Lin Ming would have just leveled the place, and the whole city if they complained too much. That's your fault, by the way. :-) Weidergebert has been my gateway drug.

It's a whole new world. :P

Chief 37

Aladdin. Jasmine lol


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