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Incubus 1 is out!

🕑 Added 2020-06-02 14:45:01 +0000 UTC

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Just finished the book and really enjoyed the story. However I spoted a couple of typos that got overlooked. One from Chapter 3 in sentence "It was obvious she was walking about Brianna." It should be "talking" not walking. And another in Chapter 8 with sentence "Since you have only just found a bondate, Anthony". You are missing the letter m to have the word read as "bondmate" instead of bondate. So far those were the only typos I noticed. I look forward to seeing what goes down in Book two.

Thank you very much! I hope you have fun!

Cryostorm

Purchased and reading, will rate soon.


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