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WIEDERGEBURT Act IV: Chapter 9

🕑 Added 2020-06-15 15:38:00 +0000 UTC

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Thank you!

Austin lloyd

I love that Eryk this scene with Lin. It’s really heartwarming and sweet.

Good catch. Thanks for pointing that out.

Illiterate Scholar

"Have to" should be "Have, too." I'm not sure if that was just the common typo, but for anyone who is curious about why it isn't 'to' in this case, think about it like this: if you can replace the 'to' with the word 'also' and the phrase doesn't lose its meaning, then it should be 'too'.

Thank you. I figured it would be nice to give them an Act where they just kinda travel and show off how amazing they are instead of one where imminent DOOM awaits around every corner.

Daniel Glasson

I have to say, I'm really enjoying the more relaxed feel to this act so far. No threats of imminent destruction, no fast approaching deadline of doom. Just the family being able to somewhat enjoy traveling together while dealing with normal stuff. Well, normal for them at least

I'm not sure that would work...but just because I can't see such overpowered characters letting anyone with evil intentions come near their son. I imagine anyone who tried would die before making an attempt. XD

I really want to see Raul getting kidnapped and before Eryk gets a chance to do anything the 4 wives of the apocalypse come riding in and blow everything to smitherines in anger

I guess we will just have to find out. XD

Grant

Something tells me that the person in charge of this city is going to be stupid and try to kidnap lin or siv or both. So far the guards have had two chances and been corrupt morons twice. I think they will also try to get revenge on the mc.

I can see where you are coming from. The first three acts feels like a really long world building arc.

Devin

Is it me, or does the story seem like it’s just starting? Like everything before, was the prologue and now the world is open and the story is ready to be told!!! I mean this in the best way!


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