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WIEDERGEBURT Act III: Chapter 53

🕑 Added 2020-03-16 14:54:33 +0000 UTC

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It's supposed to be Drage, but I think my autocorrect reset itself. I'll go back and make the changes.

Is the name of Sigrid's family Drage or Draige. I ask because you were using the latter in this chapter, when most of the previous chapters that mentioned that family was the former

I think ten wives is too big a harem. Once you get into the double digits, women in a harem become flat. That's the point where a lot of people begin complaining about how all the women feel the same and it's impossible to tell one from the other because they are just cardboard cutouts of standard harem archetypes. Lol. I do have a plan for the elements though. I think I'm going to surprise a lot of people.

Grant

I just had a thought. Eryk claimed to never master the light element. Maybe each wife gives him about half mastery of their element so he would need two light wives to master the light element and two of each respective element to master the other elements. That would mean in the end he would have about 10 wives, give or take a few if they have mastery of dual elements. Or it could simply mean he ran out of time or is limited in some way based off of the elements he born with.

rykott

Super oh noes.


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