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WIEDERGEBURT Act III: Chapter 51

🕑 Added 2020-03-09 15:40:33 +0000 UTC

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Mathias Eriksson

This ending reminds me of kakashi in naruto shippudden he killed someone the same way ^^

Illiterate Scholar

Yeah, there are loads of Earth references in this story, but the extra moon, different length of the year, and longer month throw that off. I suppose if something truly cataclysmic happened on a celestial scale this could be far, far in Earth's future. It could also be that Earth was destroyed and humanity had left for another planet, and sometime in this new planet's past, humanity had decided to name some of their settlements after Earth cities. If this IS Earth, then that means another moon got picked up and Earth's orbit is now twice the distance from the sun compared to what it is in our time period. He never mentions it in the story, but the author has mentioned in comments that the day is around 36 hours long, too, so the spin would have had to have slowed by 50% or so, also. It makes more sense to me that humanity became a spacefaring race, left Earth, and lost its high technology because of some earlier cataclysm, but at some point was interbred with some alien race that had control of whatever force it is to which 'spiritualism' refers in the story.

Dennis Palsson

they are on earth, just way after science fell, or altered before it's rise. Bucharest is the capital and largest city of Romania.

Grant

I like how the shaman claims humans are weak while relying on the strength of another, aka the basilisk. They attack from behind in the shadows and use creatures to fight their wars, what a bunch of cowardly hypocrites.

I nodded in acknowledgment of her knowledge. “This plan was inspired by a story I once read about a man known as Leonidas who, with only a small force of three hundred men, was able to hold off a much larger enemy army of over one hundred-thousand strong for seven days by fighting in a pass very similar to this one. (I'd recommend removing the name Leonidas from this paragraph, unless down the road you want to tie this into Earth's history somehow? The name forced my mind down a path that is somewhat story breaking) A larger forces greatest strength is their ability to overwhelming their enemy with sheer numbers. (forces to force's and overwhelming to overwhelm)

Cuz he was a bitch. XD

rykott

Awww... the poor Sekbeist Shaman... he was so confident and ended up dying like a bitch :P


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