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WIEDERGEBURT Act III: Chapter 50

🕑 Added 2020-03-05 15:33:15 +0000 UTC

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Illiterate Scholar

Yeah, I totally understand. I'm not an author, but I do the same thing when writing anything sufficiently long enough to give me the chance to lose my place in my head. Whenever I have the time/inclination while reading I'll try to point out what I can. I am a sort of natural-born copy editor/grammar+spelling nazi, which is kinda weird considering I'm slightly dyslexic. Maybe I learned to compensate for it sometime early in my school career, and that has caused me to spot errors and typos like a hawk.

I do sometimes get tunnel vision when I write. You'd be surprised by how much crap I type when I get like that. I'll go back and fix these areas. Thank you for pointing them out.

Illiterate Scholar

I think you went into blind author mode when you were trying to type this out: "The Sekbeist that had been situated on their gondola situated on top of the Greater Behemoth were also thrown off." Shouldn't it be something more like "The Sekbeist that had been riding in the gondola situated on top of the Greater Behemoth were also thrown off"? And, you are missing an 'o' here: "then she would arrive to late." 'To' should be 'too'.

Illiterate Scholar

I think you went into blind author mode when you were trying to type this out: The Sekbeist that had been situated on the gondola situated on top of the Greater Behemoth were also thrown off. then she would arrive to late.

Good catch.

I believe Catherina is the one who said this, not Catylina: “Spiritualists of Nevaria!” Catalyna shouted, her voice echoing across the rampart where all of her forces were currently situated.

I really hop Siv gets over her trauma soon or a lot of people will die and i also hope agains hope that dante survives

rykott

Oh noes.


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