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WIEDERGEBURT Act III: Chapter 42

🕑 Added 2020-02-06 15:18:29 +0000 UTC

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I'll have to go back and check, but I believe it didn't strengthen skin either. It has been several years since I wrote this.

Joshua Ruiz

I was wondering about the diamond skin pill? Didn't the body forging pill do everything but bones. Then the bone pill mentioned in the published books take care of bone density? Or is the diamond skin pill something he just hasn't made yet? Love your books!

Thanks for pointing these mistakes and inconsistancies out. I'll be sure to fix those in my manuscript. I appreciate the help. :-)

Illiterate Scholar

Some more issues I thought I'd point out, just in case. 'non-compatible ingredients' would be better as 'incompatible,' or simply 'ingredients that are not compatible with each other' (if you want a bit of extra length for a sentence). 'Three War Spiritual Widening Pill' is probably supposed to be 'Three Way Spiritual Widening Pill,' even if being able to fight three wars with one pill would be hella awesome. You wrote "It was the dragoness I had fought and subsequently saved the day before," but in the story, and in a comment from the previous chapter, you specifically mention that they had walked in the wrong direction for "several days," so he couldn't have saved her the day before.

Member #4 v2 Get!

New harem additions must always be celebrated. I thought it was time to expand. :D

Yay for a new harem addition! I am holding out for Erica joining too (please o please!). Awesome chapter to read; quite heart warming and interesting at the same time. Nicely done yet again good sir.

Super adorbs. XD

rykott

Siv is pretty adorable... she did give poor Eryk blue balls though :P


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