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WIEDERGEBURT Act III: Chapter 41

🕑 Added 2020-02-03 15:40:10 +0000 UTC

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Thank you. I'll see about fixing this. Even small inconsistencies can break continuity.

Just a minor inconsistency. Eryk has started fires in the past with his lightning element in the past.

This one is a bit confusing, but they actually walk for a couple of days. Spiritualists can go several days without sleep. I'm glad you are enjoying this story. :-)

Dennis Erwin

"However, after several days of walking, I soon realized that there was a problem." - you may have already caught this, but I'm pretty sure you meant hours there. Fantastic story. I can't believe the amount of sleep I'm losing catching up on it.


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